haru's manga / #Comedy(64)

it was initially adorable at first but after the sex scenes, their relationship didn't make sense to me at all. I didn't think that lil pup liked this guy that much cuz I thought he was still wary of this guy but also has a soft spot for him What was the point of this story? Two hurt individuals finding refuge in their relationship? tbh the lil fighter pup was the reason why I read til the end, all cuz he's very adorable What did I like about the story? 1. the flow to how they met was a nice setting 2. lil pup's story & similar goal as big wolf--to beat someone up 3. the last sex scene cuz I felt like at that point their relationship was good enough for an intimate scene What could've been improved? 1. The theme--instead of modern setting, it should've leaned towards clans and less civil places and more ancient settings 2. felt like lil pup had his arc cut off short cuz it just focused a lot on big wolf's family & he had barely anything to do outside of the wolve's territory 3. tbh it felt weird and unnatural for big wolf to be all intimate with lil pup with the biting, skin, and 'babe' 4. the first sex scene & the reaction of it was too sudden and unexpected for me 5. the backstory of big wolf was delayed so much!! the conclusion of his family situation was very messy, and where is the conclusion for their ending?--it's only slightly different from what they were--lil pup doesn't even know your whole backstory!!!

It's funny and fun....but where's Chiyo QmQ

bro God was so funny setting expectations of a love confession just to say that lol

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