deadass MADE ME CRY BUT IM JUST A SENSITIVE MF OKAY. OKAY SO BIG SPOILERS
so the plot itself it pretty good, and its a good concept for a magical girl story. but only thing i have to criticize LOWKEYY IS THE PACING. i feel like if it was longer, especially in the beginning, it would be more hard-hitting, and the end could've been more hard-hitting if the plot was longer and there were more screen time with all the characters. LIKE I JUST WISH IT HIT HARDER N MADE ME CRY HARDER
a genuine criticism is the very weird nudity and sexual hints with these MIDDLE SCHOOLERS and HIGH SCHOOLERS. i dont know how to feel about the two villain sisters and also the random nudity esp when kirari and the two other girls woke up buttass naked with each other cuz theyre stalkers or smth idk. THE END THO RLLY FUCKED ME UP. LIKE DID THE MC HAVE TO FORGET ABOUT HER FRIENDSHIP WITH THE OTHERS? and the end was just sad but at the same time I KNOWWWW I SAID ITS SAD AND I CRIED but also i feel like it also couldve gone in a safer direction where the suicide girls could've stayed friends. but ig thats how soru could've lived with kirari. ITS FUCKING SAD AND IM SAD UGHHH IDK WHY THEY DIDNT GET TO STAY FRIENDS BUT THERE WAS GOOD CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT IN MOST CHARACTERS. i wouldnt PERSONALLY read again, but it was a good first time reading. kind of weird to reccommend tho HELP cuz i did b4 i saw the weird parts and i rlly wonder if the other person WILL JUDGE ME... but honestly... good for a first read? i enjoyed the series a lot and it impacted and motivated me even for a little while. I GUESS I RECCOMMEND HELP???? UHHMMMM!!!!!
Suicide Girl