I have mixed feelings about this one...
It is pretty obvious that the uke likes being an M (he thinks/says so on more than one occasion), but I just don't like the lack of a safeword. For me, as soon as sex takes on an sm flavour there needs to be one. Of course this is just a fantasy/story/yaoi, so I know I shouldn't take it so seriously...
And another thing. What do you do when you've already used one "super"?
ADD ANOTHER! I am the super, super, super, supper S!
I just thought it was a bit funny how there's added super...
Do Do Do S-Kyuu Kareshi