Too unserious for me, using language like ikr or tbh to make it 'relatable' and 'funny' when it just pulled me out of the experience. Also, MC was just a fucking doormat the whole time. She never took the initiative to do anything, it was always literally paved for her by her brothers or an event happening to her. I didn't need her to be a badass in every moment but I did just want her to have a spine. ML was just annoying, I want her to punch him in the face and cuss him out instead of them getting together, honestly.
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Extra Doesn't Want to be Overly Obsessed