I like this story except I think it was rushed to end with a sex scene!!! They didn't even get to be romantic just I want to have you lets have sex boom boom done!!! I like a long explicit love scene with some romance to it real foreplay and then the love making with both of them being happy and holding each other at the end of it being the perv I am (lol)!!! I didn't get any kind of feeling of love in this story, don't get me wrong I liked the art work and the concept but there wasn't a feeling of romance in this story!!! Just my thoughts!!! thx D
Koisuru Taka wa Tsume o Kakusu