Uchi no Ko ni Narinasai
These stories were ok!! The first story was really cute!! I like the art work but the love scene could have been better!! I like the love that these two young men have for each other really sweet!! I would have loved to see if they really got married!! The second story was kind of messed up because of the playboy celebrity messing with girls and leaving his lover hurting I wasn't happy with that!! I would have been nice if it was longer and to let us know did he stop cheating on his lover or not after the lover asked him to stop!! I liked the art work but it would have been better if there was a love scene between lovers!! I wanted the celebrity to stop fooling with other people if he is in love with his lover!! I did though enjoy reading this!! thx D
Kagome