The first story was ok but that last one was fantastic with the explicit love scene that I really liked it was exciting!!! Maybe if the first story had this kind of love scene it would be exciting too!!! I like Otomo's editor and the way him and Masafumi got into it was very very exciting and sexy!!! I would love to see more of these stories I want more more more so PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ASAP!!! thx D
Kousoku Syndrome