Skulker_Ghost's manga / #Bad(9)

Wow, this turned out to be really disappointing in the last chapter. The reveal that Yuto (ML) slept around so easily instead of pursuing Hagiwara (MC) was a major letdown. Threw the whole feel of the story and messed up the flow. That random dude popping up at the train station and revealing ML's "indiscretions" (I want to call them that but ML didn't actually cheat since they weren't dating yet but, boy, ML has an unfaithful heart [d*ck?]) actually startled me and kicked me right out of the story. Hence the final rating 'cause I actually ended up disliking this. It was a completely unnecessary plot twist.

Dumb. Convoluted. Toxic. ML is a psycho, not in an interesting way. FL is boring af, standard fantasy fare FLMC with all the worst stereotypical elements. Art gets worse as story progresses. Lots more wrong but it's enough to just say don't bother reading this.

My fave part of this is the pic (screencap'd it 'cause it's meme-tastic) Madeleine Scans adds at the end of ch 7 because it made me actually laugh aloud because it perfectly encapsulates how I felt after I read this. Not the "official" ch 7 'cause the "official" TL is not good, it's full of grammatical errors. Def not better than Madeleine (though their TL also had errors but they don't try to pass themselves off as official, and you can tell they're making a genuine effort as a dedicated fangroup), which at least also had that amusing final panel.

The TL is pretty bad so it affects the story. Art is... almost good, but not quite. Aside from the bad TL, story is only so-so because none of the characters are interesting. Unfortunately, time spent and effort made to read this isn't worth the outcome. About 1.5 stars so I'm down-rating it because I think that's more accurate.