stressedpenguin's manga / #demon(57)

A bit of a rushed mess but overall okay. I do like my cheap isekai bl 4/10

I'm sorry I was so bored for over half of that. There were all these gaps in logic and story transitions that just left me confused a lot. Like half of what happened with yonosuke made no sense and was never properly explained. It was just like "this is happening" and then "this is no longer happening hope you understand" Also the seme nust rapes the uke at the start and then we immediately put them in a fluffy, domestic, living together scenario? What? There was that whole thing with the other demon who makes trouble at the start, sexually assaults the uke, is forgiven (of course =_=) and fucks off for the rest of the story. They keep presenting new drama, new stakes, that never amount to anything. Everything is resolved by a few panels of filler words and sparkles. This was so lame. 3/10

Is there ike a chapter missing btwn ch 4 and 5 cuz that sure.... skipped a lot 6/10

Uke finds out he comes from a line of succubi? succubuses? succupeople? And now needs to get fucked by a guy to survive. So he goes straight to his childhood friend. There's some drama near the end and the seme gets angry, forces the uke in sex, and then gets all distressed about it. It's pretty standard. @me, i cried over this, but it's cuz my tear ducts are overactive so not actually an indication that this is good 5/10

It's a oneshot so theres not much it can do. Was very cliche shonen manga-y. Yknow. Sealed ice demon. Damsel in distress. Guy with ice powers. We end on an emotionally charged fight. Tada. Minor gripe: the girl gets pissed at the fire guy who barging in on her during her bath BUT SHE WAS LITERALLY BEING FROZEN BY AN ICE MONSTER SPAWNING IN THE BATH WATER??? She's like "perv!" but he was just... saving her life... It's a super minor moment but completely broke the immersion for me. 5/10

Last read ch 5. Ngl... I am lost. I understand 0% of the plot. Art is a little rough to read. There's a lotta... rape but also the victims are kinda letting it happen on purpose so they can kill these demons? Also one of these guys who all look the same to me is some kinda artifact that can restore the demons to angel status or smth and then they get smited by god It's kinda a massive demon x exorcist orgy? kinda? idk ¯_(ツ)_/¯

Dropped at ch 2. Was expecting the demon to be like.. actually scary and, y'know, competent? Useless puppy semes are fine, just not my cup of tea. I'll pass on this one -/10, cant rate

super horny uke x his adorable, nervous demon bf let's go. Looking forward to the absurdity W...was that a *good* ending? Mans was afraid he was gonna die of dehydration by the end and his that he probably tore his hole by the end from his lover who's very afraid of hurting him so like... I think that was actually a bad ending... does demon bf have like... magic lubr or smth he could use next time... 5/10?