The Stone Cold General & the Maid Perplexed by his Burning Passion
Invested. Now this, is how u make a strong, smart character the main focus of the story, without making it insufferable to live inside their heads.
Toppuu to Beat
I like mc so VERY much
Fall for me (songha)
Wym the end!? They should have extra so we can see the development of this relationship. Also, all the side characters deserve their own stories! They all have looks & personalities, I would read about them all! This story was a textbook definition of "slowburn" it burned so slow, I had to question if I turned any heat on. And I'm slightly disappointed that we didn't get the steamy time at the end after all the anticipation, but it's nothing I precisely needed, I loved the flutty domestic moments they had, & the drama with the ex. Could've used that concept better & more, but just as is nice too. Anyway, I liked mc & his narcissistic character, I got frustrated by him never giving up on his old tactic, but he does teach a good listen about patience lol. I also love how he's just a romantic, looking for his one true love. He so me frfr, just I have the dating count of the ml, lmao. Ml is an intersecting person in general. Though he felt as flat as a board sometimes, but he is a fresh breath of air in this toxic seme industry. We love that for him. He Could've admit being aro/ace though, it was right there.
As Long As You
It's a bit dry, but it's only 17 pages. Though it wasn't bad, I still think it could've been showed warmer.
Oniisan no koto sukinano?
Boring... but not bad? It's cute as a fluffy-smutty read I guess, but I wasn't feeling like smut exactly. Plus I did want a manly uke, but the seme was way too air-headed for my liking. Though he was right in many occasions, he was still certifiedly pathetic. The uke was too much of a cool guy even at the end, that even after he tried, I still didn't feel the love. Am I making sense?
Young Good Boyfriend
I finished this a long time ago, Idk why I never marked it as read?? I do remember absolutely loving it. Love me a good healthy relationship, troublesome as that agegap was
Furimuite tsukamaete
Soft, nothing too dramatic. Healthy, but I could've done without the "pent up" part at the start. At least he asked for consent I guess. Story wasn't much of a story, and they kept repeating: sleeping, Cool, Cute. So many times it gave me a headache. But I'll forgive it, cause I like me a cuddle.
mouth to mouse
DEPRESSING! I didn't see a tragedy tag, damn. Thankfully it's only a oneshot, or it would've been sadder. A good story about a 2nd chance in life for mc, meeting and saying goodbye to his love who unlived himself. He unlived himself, but told mc not to do it too. Gagekeeping unliving is crazy. But he's right, you should Keep Yourself Safe.
Sating the Wolf