Well for a 1st chap is pretty interesting
Edit: [30/12/19 5:11] Wow How could've forgotten about this story, I do feel like I did read up to chap 3, but after that nada me sonaba. Anyway this story is really good, and I loooove how Hayakawa (once they are together) is so hungry for Konno he's kind of a sadist uke. But! ('Course can't be perfect) Why Konno doesn't want to put it in??!! So frustrating!! Fuck him already, that's really unsatisfactory, I mean even with a Panel of them lying down on the bed after sex the next day and Hayakawa thinking something like "at last he put it in!“ would be fine you know?! I'm no asking for much, as the way Hayakawa sucked Konno's dick had me satisfied sex related. That and that umm I don't like the chill way of the story telling, it felt distant, even though I was crushing hard on Konno, I don't know I couldn't connect with them nor the story, maybe, in a way... It felt rigid, I don't know... But it does feel that way (the same has happened to me in the others author's story but a bit less with the other may I say, which I just read before of this one and hope is not finished) anyway the story was good but maybe something was lacking, I don't know, but I feel like there's something more I need, 8.5/10
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