Honestly this is not very good. In stories that have gambling there should be tension and it needs to feel like the characters can lose, but this is not like that. The FL is winning constantly and it’s not even because shes smart or cunning. Shes just lucky and thats not fun to read about.
Also the characters are super flat. Can you describe what the FL and ML are like? Can you describe how their characters are different?? They’re nice and….. I guess dumb because how has the FL not realized that ML IS THE KID?? Like really??
It’s so painful to sit here and pretend like she has some actual brain in there.
One Pair Lady