It's preeetty good, tho there is something lacking, like i wish there would be some depth (?) about their feelings i guess. Like i wish the seme expressed his emotion or feelings to the uke more but i guess that is just the character design. Overall its kinda average (at least for me), not that smutty which i think is good for a yaoi with an innocent type uke, and really enjoyed it.
Dream Land (YOSHIDA Yuuko)