kunii~<3's manga / #Neighbors(1)

LMFAO???! this is definitely a new author and their first work, the characters are Hella cliche and shallow caricatures, the story is so goddamed rushed omg, the paneling is also cramped and composition is generic, the art has a mimicked feel. Obvsly I couldn't get into it at all and didn't read past chapter 1, normally I wouldn't leave a review but that first chapter was so frickin funny it was like a bullet train speeding past any Characterization or basic development so it can run you over with smut The extra star is for making me actually laugh out loud when they just started boinking outta nowhere