asm613's manga / #slutty(12)

art not as good this one. also- uke was very unlikable. there's no hint of why/how the seme is attracted to him or why the seme would want him. uke is so selfish & unappealing. faces of seme & sempai very handsome- face of uke good most of time. but body of uke too thin & fem_ even body of seme was rather thin & looked odd & unnatural at some angles. have seen better by artist_ if they're going to shadow & shade all the good parts they should have better stories & do better drawing of body parts they do show- lots of flatness and thin in this art

hot action- but not very consensual- would like 2 see stories with art like this that is consensual- less disturbing. bottom guy letting himself be used by masculine guys- talk dirty 2 him, feed him their juices, etc

all boys school- 2 boys were friends when small- but 1 doesn't recognize the other now- the 1 that doesn't remember is the all boy school cum-dump_ he lets any guy that wants 2 use him, use him_ it's horrible. it's not fun or funny- what's the point?

a big strong, muscle detective getting raped by a baby, girly-boy_ and then says it's love...why do these authors keep on writing rape/love stories ? hate them. then there's kidnapping, drugging, rape at s&m club_ lots of raping going on. horrible story. decent art. lots of non-consensual sex. the detective or ex-cop is a hottie- the art of him is the best part of story.