i like the idea of eternal love- they wish and r granted 2 b reincarnated and live 2gether again- with some difficulties. 1st love is feudal era then they r reincarnated 500 years later-
- some stupid stuff- like putting a guy with absolutely no knowledge of the language, math, etc, in the same school and grade he was in b4_ so here he is, in school- basically stupid with zero knowledge- and everybody tries 2 take advantage of him and several try 2 rape him- even a girl. if his reincarnated, older lover wanted 2 keep him safe why would he throw him into that situation? ridiculous.
-- some humor-- the body of the guy he is now in was having sex with lots of students and the principal- when the principal tried 2 force himself on the new guy in the body-- his toupe is pulled off and he's bald- the kid asks if he's a monk.
- the story has potential-- i'd like 2 keep the reincarnations short and have a story that has them reincarnated several times- 2 see how the world changes over the period of a thousand years but their love is always absolute and true and unchanging and pure.
i hope there r updates- thanks 4 sharing it
Kabuki