asm613's manga / #ok-wouldn't-read-again(4)

art not as good this one. also- uke was very unlikable. there's no hint of why/how the seme is attracted to him or why the seme would want him. uke is so selfish & unappealing. faces of seme & sempai very handsome- face of uke good most of time. but body of uke too thin & fem_ even body of seme was rather thin & looked odd & unnatural at some angles. have seen better by artist_ if they're going to shadow & shade all the good parts they should have better stories & do better drawing of body parts they do show- lots of flatness and thin in this art