please don't read this, the author is sick and don't know what they right about, it is not a good or right representation in any sense, its not even romantic
I admit to be more interested in a stories with the word "rape" than "cute" as comments, this stories usually even when not doing it 100% always try to shock and go deeper than the fluffy and fantasized romance but with this kind of cis hetero vanilla author who fetishizes lgbt and bdsm community they are just making fetish porn, what is "okay" IF you do your thing (porn) right, what is not this case,
there is no bdsm as for that you need boundaries, and submission, the author just represents abuse and violence (submission is not be afraid, and this is what her FL do she makes her partner afraid and insecure and than takes advantage of it)
as LGBT it does a shit role, everyone sexuality is more about the fetish they are into than people
finally if you are going for the rape and gay man fetish make it clear so you can find your right public, if so no one would be so pissed, as you sell your work as a romantic comedy but do a shit porn with illegal content
Sadistic Beauty