Zhongli's manga / #simple(228)

Art is good but the story is so childish.

Incredibly naive. Love does not require sex, mangaka. The pacing was so rushed too. Before you get into the scene, it's already moved on. It would be nice to conclude this with a visit to his club and telling the girls about his new relationship. Another is that the uke could have been anybody. They just happened to bump into each other while he was desperate for a male friendship. I get the low ratings now.

Told more than it showed. Predictable.

Poorly written. More telling than showing.

Treated r so lightly