Zhongli's manga / #lost potential(393)

6 ---> Akari's body Bad art, bad story, bad characters. I understand hikari grew to resent akari but the whole manga was terribly executed and only glorified the awkward sex scenes with "sexy" poses only contortionists can do. I expected smut but this manga is absolutely terrible even at that part. Rather than aroused, I felt off whenever I keep seeing the uke twist his body like you would a hypersexualized heroine.

Strong start but it gets weaker by the end. Happy ending though.

I don't buy their dynamic. It feels like the uke is only in that relationship because it's advantageous plus the seme is hot. Uke consistently tries to push the seme away while the seme is clearly head over heels in love with him. Honestly, I feel like the seme can better match the neighbor who shows more consideration. If this is the creator's idea of tsundere then sadly it isn't looking like the tolerable toxic moe one.

I was eager to find out how Omega plans to seduce the Beta but boi the story is so immature and is offering nothing new nor creative. It chose the basic tropes and story flow. Definitely not my cup of tea but new readers might appreciate this, maybe. :p