Zhongli's manga / #lost potential(393)

Date still should have apologized.

No subtext in eriting, drags on a scene that's already very familiar. SEME is rushing too.

WOW, each and every character is utterly UNLIKABLE and I don't think the creator intended that to be so, as evidenced by how they are written. A tiger who was introduced comically ends up being a reckless assaulter, a rabbit who blocks his long-time friend after finding out he has feelings for him (accidentally outed), a long-time friend who suddenly is very possessive he thinks too less of his supposed unrequited love, an outsider bear who continued harrassing the victim of SA, also same guy assumes his relationship with bottom is official-- starts calling him babe but the entire time the guy is in dub con, the nephew rabbit who ignores his fox bf who lied about being at work when he's actually with his own fox brother--couldve talked it out, the fox bf being a detestable boss at work, was also previously written as uncomfortable lying to his rabbit bf but later on he flat out confidently lies to his brother, the fox brother and his bf was previouslyshown to have a good relationship then the next his seme apparentlydoesnt like se>< with him.. THIS IS ALL JUST A MESS! You establish a light-hearted and adorable atmosphere in the beginning then suddenly you jam in multiple conflicts with no resolutions in sight-- and the conflicts are all about seemingly irredeemable flaws that just gives the impression they are all too immature to be in a relationship but still wants readers to care for them anyway. How could we when they are written so poorly? I normally don't complain about art style but since the writing and story is beyond saving for me I feel like the artist should be drawing the bottom of their NOSES now too.