Zhongli's manga / #lost potential(393)

Told more than it showed. Predictable.

Ary is good but the story is so bland it's boring even if it's meant to be all smut, it's still bland and boring.

Poorly written. More telling than showing.

Interesting premise but written poorly

It was so good until the uke accepted the invitation of the other guy. I am fine with him doing that only if we get a longer arc of him but we didnt so it came off like how the insecure seme feared he could be. It would be a heaps nicer story if uke also had his own change.