Honestly that could have been a lot better! I liked the premise but the execution was not good. And I don’t even think that not being able to see his face till the end is that much of a minus point/ problem. But rather after chapter 3 the story didn’t make any sense to me anymore? I don’t even know what it was bc I genuinely did not understand what they were saying in these chapters? Like it was good English i got every word individually and everything but as a whole, it felt like I wasn’t understanding it. I also hated the whole chapter in the bar!! Again what happened there? Who was the past lover? And of whom? Why was he so unnecessarily jealous? And I hate possessive guys like “you can’t show your face”, “you can’t go to the bar alone” etc. Like honestly what will happen? He’s just talking to your mutual friends! Oh btw I don’t mean the scene were he was jealous bc mask guy revealed his face to the glass guy, I think in that situation it was at least understandable why he was upset since he as the most important person to the mask guy should have seen the face as the first at least from this group of ppl but the other scenes. I liked the crossdress chapter and the first two chapters I guess but apart from that it just wasn’t nearly as good as it could have been.
It got boring after the third chapter...I just waited for it to be over, barley finished this...
Kamengoshi Ni, Kiss