Art style & the sex scenes - awesome. The cafe good overall feeling is nice too, the idea & the beginning is great too...BUT!
The story development is very lacking! The seme went from "this guy is annoying" , "I'll fuck this guy" , "I'll never have a pairing" to "he is my bitch (which I fucking hate so much!!!) and flowers and confessions and asking him to be his pair...all of that happened in 0.000001!! I mean there were 10 chapters, and no character development happened. None. Just changing the behavior hella fast!
It’s just sad because the & the overall idea is great (maybe take the part where it’s like he seduced his brother out....it’s just really weird, and no one tried to explain that it wasn’t even his fault...)
Takane no Hana wa Chirasaretai