IDKBTS's manga / #Alpha x Omega(11)

Art style & the sex scenes - awesome. The cafe good overall feeling is nice too, the idea & the beginning is great too...BUT! The story development is very lacking! The seme went from "this guy is annoying" , "I'll fuck this guy" , "I'll never have a pairing" to "he is my bitch (which I fucking hate so much!!!) and flowers and confessions and asking him to be his pair...all of that happened in 0.000001!! I mean there were 10 chapters, and no character development happened. None. Just changing the behavior hella fast! It’s just sad because the & the overall idea is great (maybe take the part where it’s like he seduced his brother out....it’s just really weird, and no one tried to explain that it wasn’t even his fault...)

It is a great manga, but hard to read at times, for example, the rape...I had to skip that chapter. The way their relationship started seemed silly and very unreal, but the way they developed as a couple and the hardships they went through really made the story unique and wonderful to read. I am happy I got to read this story, it was just so great! Love the characters, the storyline, the buildup, AND THE COUPLE AND BABYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY.

It’s pretty good, it’s is so wholesome it can make you sick and it’s a lotttt of smut, no plot really, but it’s fun reading it once.

Bruh this is An amazing manga. Holy. Shit. So fucking good. The first couple is wonderful, a little on the creepy side on the whole “I met this person and he is mine”, but loved them and it was a nice story. Now….the second couple. Fuck. Enemies to lovers, overcoming destiny, trauma and fear to be together

It was actually pretty interesting to be honest, as I am one of those that LOVES the fated pair troupe, but then his fated pair is TRASH and doesn't actually ever love him, and he finds someone who actually deserves him, loves him, and treats him with care. it makes it a new and fresh story, and the author executed it well. Ngl it was a little Wattpad moment at first lol, and I was lowkey gonna stop, but it became a good story and very nice smut (like after the first time which was borderline SA...I wish they would have removed that part). It is not the best manga, but I liked reading it.

UMMM...I have thoughts. So I think this could have been good, if the alpha wasn't kind of disrespectful, and them having sex on the second meeting, and alpha saying he loves him after sex cause they are a "pair", him buying the host club cause he wants to observe him 24/7...it was just very off. The story has good points, the omega is cool af, they seem to be very much in love and living well together, he doesn't make him quit his job, the art is very good, communication between them is pretty nice too. It just has "off" parts, so 3/5 for me.