Blyss's manga / #Too short(191)

There was a chance it would be good....sadly it kinda fell flat. The story was nonsensical and the segs scenes werent good enough to make up for that

Both stories were sweet and cute....although also both could be longer, I want more storryyyy

I think this story has potential...but as it is it's just a lot of trauma and rape labelled as 'plot'. The art was nice though.

For a oneshot this was really nice, short and sweet. I loved how wholesome it was. It definitely could have been longer and been even better. An

This would be great as a full story lol

If that was the ending that was terrible....ifbitbwS a cliffhanger, welll I hate those too lol