Blyss's manga / #Confusing(8)

Not sure if the story is confusing or the translation is just really bad. The outfits are nice though.

There was an attempt at plot, but it was rather confused....the porn was also pretty non-existant so not really sure what the purpose of this book was. It has potential, just fell a bit flat imo

I think i liked the first story....but after the first chapter or two it became very unreadable and hard to understand

I really like parts of this story, but it really feels like chapters are missing... the story is really confused snd doesn't make sense a lot. The potential is there though