Blyss's manga / #Angsty(27)

I likeds parts of it, but it had a lot of gaps in the story and some really strange plot points. Definitely could use some editing and actual planning

The passing back and forth through time was interesting. The development was good. But this could definitely have used either a couple extra chapters or even another volume to really flesh out the story properly

It's not a terrible plot, but I swear I've read the same plot elsewhere but better. MC is kinda all over the place in terms of personality. Seems like they were changed whenever needed...which makes the story more like pwop.....but without the first p so much