dooooool's manga / #Good art(2)

2021-09-06 23:35 marked

Tags: Flawed but interesting Don’t like uke’s design tho Rough turns to Fluff Peaked at mid point Too drawn out Could’ve been shorter Good art Emotional seme +emotional uke

2021-09-21 20:42 marked

Tags: Practically finished Started promising but went to shit Melodramatic towards the end Undeveloped characters and relationships Good art Men who look like men Iffy translation from the midpoint