translation sucks
From comments:
1) I loved the art but honestly they formed a relationship in the blink of an eye, in 20 chapters they had sex like 8 times.
There wasnt enough plot and it had potential to be amazing but the author somehow rushed their way through it and put it to an end
2) I read this twice and i still cant understand the plot nor what theyre saying. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
3) The story is lame and generic.
Your Devotion is My Salvation