Who's Your Daddy?
I thought it was ok. I wish they hadn’t made it so obvious that the crown prince is the dad. also for being so high up in the guard Louis got hurt so many times and wasn’t very good at investigating lol… my favorite part is probably just the concept that men from the royal family can get anyone pregnant regardless of their gender. this is my first time seeing something like that and I just think it has a lot of potential. their baby is adorable, just wish they’d have shown Louis’s baby bump/ something about him giving birth. after going through my other completed series i've edited this to have a extra star because I still liked it better than others i've read in spite of its flaws
One Take
was really interested in knowing what happened to cause drama in this story but it ended up being something SUPER cliché and obvious. I was extremely disappointed by this towards the end and felt like I still had a lot of questions about the main couple’s relationship. editing this later on and taking a star away to reflect my disappointment with this comic... also i'm salty I paid money to read most of this just for the build up from the beginning to end so fucking flat... and to feel like I had more questions about the top at the end than I did at the start.
Love Shuttle