Time's Up
bruh... what was the point of bringing up the dude's trauma if the two brothers never learn about it? to make the reader feel bad for him? I never did, because even with that trauma he still shouldn't have done all those things to the brothers. I also think that they wouldn't have felt bad for him either, even if they did know. so was it to make the reader understand why he's so homophobic? when that doesn't even matter to the story... and just made me dislike like the main character and the story even more. It left a really bad taste in my mouth and just urgh. I could pretty much tell how this was going to end up as soon as they revealed that the brown haired brother liked the main character. pure obsession turned deranged from the bullying he suffered through. I also knew that his friend was going to get killed as soon as he saw he'd gotten hard... it was all too cliche of a revenge p0rn plot. idk it just felt so rushed, super predictable, and unoriginal. it would have been better left as a p0rn without plot situation imo. like it felt like before the MC's friend got involved. but that's just my opinion. the only character I liked in this was the younger brother (long hair and glasses) because he was consistent in his hatred for the MC. Plus he was the best looking character in the comic and used toys all these mother fuckers need therapy. art wise I think its ok. not my favorite art style ever, but it is consistent quality and while not my favorite isn't badly drawn. necks were kinda long lol but that's pretty typical for these meh stories.
Double Marks
it was ok, not good, not bad, just average. so 3 stars, the knoting and xray parts were hot, but I was annoyed they didn't keep including them. also the whole plot of this felt like it was for a story that should have lasted much longer than this did, so while the ending wasn't bad it still kinda sucked lol.
The Millennial Tiger -
probably going to DNF this because I am just not into it tbh. i've been reading this out of curiosity about the whole tiger thing but it just feels like the story is going in the same stupid loop and it's annoying me
Egoism Heat
a very cute short story... the drama felt kinda dumb, and was not expecting the female alpha to rape the omega.... what a totally unhinged response to being dumped and cheated on... like GIRL WTF. Glad the baby wasn't hers tho. I wish she had been arrested for doing that to the omega. Logic only logiced half the time, the other half of this story really needed you to have to suspend your disbelief... originally rated it 3 stars but this is more of a 2.5-3 stars situation at best. if it had been any longer I probably would have stopped reading it.
A Pure Elf Falls Into An Experiment