fishey's manga / #Revenge(4)

cuts off awkwardly even though it’s marked as complete. would have preferred to have a proper resolution to the story or for the story to have ended sooner, when the revenge was completed, than for it to continue if it wasn’t going to get finished. tho to be fair to the author I don’t know if there’s more than this anywhere else or something happened that made the story uncompletable. it also has a very big pet peeve of mine which is when someone says they’re going to kill somebody out of revenge but in reality they just hurt them physically, emotionally, or ruin their reputations. don’t say you’re going to kill some one if you’re not going to actually do it ffs.

bruh... what was the point of bringing up the dude's trauma if the two brothers never learn about it? to make the reader feel bad for him? I never did, because even with that trauma he still shouldn't have done all those things to the brothers. I also think that they wouldn't have felt bad for him either, even if they did know. so was it to make the reader understand why he's so homophobic? when that doesn't even matter to the story... and just made me dislike like the main character and the story even more. It left a really bad taste in my mouth and just urgh. I could pretty much tell how this was going to end up as soon as they revealed that the brown haired brother liked the main character. pure obsession turned deranged from the bullying he suffered through. I also knew that his friend was going to get killed as soon as he saw he'd gotten hard... it was all too cliche of a revenge p0rn plot. idk it just felt so rushed, super predictable, and unoriginal. it would have been better left as a p0rn without plot situation imo. like it felt like before the MC's friend got involved. but that's just my opinion. the only character I liked in this was the younger brother (long hair and glasses) because he was consistent in his hatred for the MC. Plus he was the best looking character in the comic and used toys all these mother fuckers need therapy. art wise I think its ok. not my favorite art style ever, but it is consistent quality and while not my favorite isn't badly drawn. necks were kinda long lol but that's pretty typical for these meh stories.

DNFing this one on chapter 5... because I just don't like it.