yinyangberry's manga / #time travel(4)

story is shallow and doesnt expand on the details of time travel but oh well it's hot

last read: ch 3

the ending was so unsatisfying FUKKKKK broke my heart and left it to collect dust, you really have no mercy.

i feel like this could be written better because it didn't really flow smoothly for me. no major changes needed, just a liiiiiittle bit of tweaking with the dialogues. overall, this was a sweet read.