The first couple's story was very short and kinda sloppy despite the potential. The second couple was more interesting to read, with a self-saboutaging low-self-esteem beta always putting others before himself.
Would give 3 stars, but the second couple earned a star all by themselves, if it were just them and the story could be more fleshed out it could even have been a 5 star.
Kashikomarimashita, Destiny