max's manga / #smut(147)

ITS SO CUTE AND TBH KINDA BRILLIANT LIKE WE ARE INTRODUCED TO A BUNCH OF CHARACTERS AND WE SEE ALLLLL OF THEM GROWING UP AND EVERYTHING AND ITS A VERY SHORT STORY SO THATS REALLY COOL overall i like pretty much everything but the story with the teacher was a lil eehh.... (the fcking age gap must be HUGE like shota was just a little littleee boy in the beginning of the manga yk) anyways, other than that 10/10 (even for the spicy scenes)

love rereading this one, very cute!!

i read it back in 2021 and thats shit is as toxic as it can get... ️: r4pe, blackmailing, 4buse, violence

i've read it before a couple years ago i hateee it when they just start doing weird stuff out of nowhere is so creepy also why do they have to draw it with such focus like??? idk how to explain it better, but they always do it when the character is buff/fat and I GET SO EMBARRASSED LIKE WTF DO IT LIKE YOU WOULD NORMALLY DO the story is tooo fast-paced and "r4pey" (straight up r4pe actually...), i also dont like how they draw the chubby character, but with the focus they give ONLY him in the spicy scenes ig i can imagine why they do that and whats the public they're focusing on... the story is also vare simple, no good plot at all, no good characters, they're all just silly and goofy with no real personality (other than the two main characters, and their personality is also very meh) really two stars is a lot for this

they're so weird but its okay because BOTH of them are problematic you would read it and probably think at first: wow that hideaki boy is really a crazy mf manipulator asf but you see, tomo was just letting him be

its an okay story

lmao i love eiji sooo much!!

SOOO GOOD!! i love how they bonded before really doing it for the first time