SmellyCup's manga / #Weird and Wrong(2)

My god this is so fucked up. Maybe if they were older, they could work this out but this is just disgusting. This tried to portray S&M play but it failed miserably, if anything this just made the community seem like psychos- which isn’t needed. Get therapy you too, fuck. Ima read more on this kink just to see for myself if I like it or not, but I understand that this story specifically isn’t an accurate or healthy portrayal of S&M

The ending was rushed. The antagonist needed to be developed more and should’ve had more scenes.With more backstory and writing, the author could’ve made the antagonist a bigger and better threat to the story, the resolution seemed too easy and even naive. Smut was good, but I wouldn’t recommend. :/