I FUCKING LOVE TRAGEDIES!!!!! HOWEVER, WHAT THE FUCK YALL THIS IS MAKING ME BREAK MY "erm actually" PERSONA ON HERE TO MAKE A GOOD REVIEW.
The On Going is probs a lie, its so short but dear god there's a lot to unpack. First of all, I need more. Like, something more in depth. It lacks the storyline but unlike the other stuff that I have HAD reviewed publicly, in my honest opinion, this is a really good short story. Sure, there's a lot of plot holes but the story was executed so amazingly I actually had to stop and check back up on my standards for a bit.
The characters are complex, which is a hard characteristic to execute in short stories like these, but they were actually well done. I need more.
The Weight of Betrayal