Honestly I was tempted to only give it three stars and even that was only because I loved the uke's transformation as he gained confidence as well as his supportive best friend. The seme was everything I hate in a person. He was selfish and treated love as a game. He took the uke's virginity and acted like he wanted to date him only to throw him aside the moment the uke returned his 'feelings'. He even humiliated him in front of another man he was sleeping with. The ONLY reason this got four stars is because in the end the seme ended up suffering for how he treated the uke. It really needs a follow up where the seme shows off how much he loves and appreciates the uke where the other guy can see. I won't be re-reading this.
Hina wa Mitsuiro no Koi ni Torawareru