Blue's manga / #Possessive lover(68)

It's short, intense, very dark, the couple are blood related brothers. Neither dies and they are together even in the end but it's very realistic in the portrayal of hardship. They are very honest about how hard it's going to be living their lives together. Normally I don't bother with "true incest" stories preferring step siblings/cousins/family friends type things instead but this was oddly moving.

I really tried to like Patrick but he's an *sshat just saiyan. The rest of the story is adorable and those baby books on the floor at the end damn near killed me from laughter. = )

Usually I'm pretty relaxed about translations since I know there can be many ways to translate and phrase things but one thing really bothered me about this one. They use escort/escorting several times but the actual translation should have been host/hosting. He was originally a host in a host club and not all hosts sleep with their clients. The confusion about the mother at the end is partly because of the way it's translated. Had the word host been used it would have made it easier to understand. Other than that it's an interesting manga.

I really love the first story and it has a realistic feeling to the uncertainty on the seme and uke's parts. The second story has always bothered me a bit and it makes me wonder if the seme is actually into kids from his words and actions. It's as if he reminds himself how pure and innocent the uke is all the time to justify his attraction. I give it five stars for the sexiness and the first story.

It was very cute but I want to feel more love between the two and I'd like to see more of the actual story. It felt like it ended just when it was getting into the interesting aspect of his training as successor.

It was an okay story but I hate the serial non-con in the first story and in the second story it feels too abrupt for the stalker to give up after a year so easily.

Very sexy set of stories.