RinRinRinB's manga / #Webtoon(270)

SAME AUTHOR AS BEATRICE?? There's no way The story of this webtoon is just too bland compared to Beatrice Tldr the characters' conversations and actions feels unnatural, nothing in the story can be considered interesting, the characters are lacking personalities, and their overall settings and circumstances feels superficial. The story pacing can be confusing at times, like it could be better. There may be a theme to this but it's too simple there doesn't seem to be an occuring conflict to be solved by the ending. Even if it was intended as a "feel good" webtoon it fails at that since the characters, again, lacks personality. This is also something more minor but there are panels where it doesn't have a perspective. I'm saying this much cuz I felt like it could've had a potential but was ultimately ruined by the author themselves cuz it felt like they themselves were confused or having a writer's block while writing this, and what should've stayed on the drafts were still published without rethinking it. Tldr of tldr,, the whole webtoon seems aimless.

I was scared at first that this will include g@ng r@pe with the MC that's why I kept skipping the first few chapters but I'm glad it's not! But the trigger warning stays the same, because of the circumstances around the main characters. I'm sad to see it end but I love the way it ended. Though it's obvious the author only knows about psychopathy on a surface level (and what the internet can provide) they did a good job trying to emulate it at realistically as their imagination can offer, so who cares if it's a little unrealistic here and there XD it's still a good psychological story despite the author's clumsy attempts from time to time, but it can be overlooked since the story telling is good anyways. I wanted more but it really isn't good to prolong this series anymore bcuz it wrapped up on a good note. I hope to see the author again, especially since u can watch their growth in this very work (story and art wise), and I really love and appreciate their passion for this work.

I really like the premise but I wish it could be a bit more realistic. I felt like I was reading a fairy tale the whole time.