Hiyori-chan's manga / #want more!!!(2)

False Memories (Lee Gpiee)

Complete | Lee Gpiee | 2000 released
2024-03-05 00:06 marked

I liked it, the story was nice but could've been better. The chemistry was there. I did expect more tho... it all felt very rushed in the end, i feel like a continuation would've been nice... some more background on both characters as well as more conflict around ha woon getting his memories back would've really helped the story be more interesting and less rushed. It really just missed something in end. The POTENTIAL was there tho!

Bye Bye

Complete | Doo Down | 2019 released
2024-04-28 02:30 marked

Okey...it was good, but like the ending?? It doesnt feel like an ending, and we really just jumped from them being like 'hey me going to the bridge and killing myself was a misunderstanding, let me show you around the bridge' to six months later bro is pregnant...and they're husbands?! And then boom introduce some blond omega woman in the last chap to make uke jealous and insecure?? But then seme has 'sex' with him and all is well they make a good couple? Idk the end was not an end like it just did not feel like one. And now that im thinking about the story...i dont feel like the chemistry was there? Like even more so near the end... it surely wasnt the best ive read but it was okay could definitly use some more side stories cause now it just feels unfinished.... The topics touched upon was a nice change, it was more drama, heartbreak, etc. The suicide, losing a baby, living with the thought of is my partner going to try suicide again. A happy ending is definitly not a must, but if you want to go in that direction at least finish it... It just isnt to memorable of a story for me...