Hiyori-chan's manga / #Yaoi(10)

It was sweet, and healthy... kinda boring, but maybe im just to fucked up :( i would definitly like this more if i hadn't read some more hardcore stuff. But idk it was sweet, but the MC' where just kinda boring... feel kinda bad not giving this a higher rating since it was healthy and the communication was great. They just really didn't make my heart flutter.

Nice concept, very quick read tho. Definitly a good storyline to build upon, sad they made it this short. But nice overal, just a brain to 0 capacity read. Smut and that's it.

I loved it! The fact they were so healthy too. I had a harder time liking uke (already forgot his name) cause he had such a blank expresion all the time. But i did come to like him later on. The fact he was quite expressionless got a funnier plus his sex face was nice hahaha. They were a funny couple, it was a nice light read. The sexy scenes were chef kiss i like the buff uke who knows what he wants trope haha. I did like them both and seeing them work out misunderstandings together without the toxic shit was very nice. Communication queens!

The BDSM was done GREAT, like this person knows dom-sub play so well. It was very well done, super enjoyed it! Definitly a nice not toxic just smut and some fluff no brainer!

i've read like 4 chapters but this shit is fucking hilarious!!! Seme has a nice ass, god damn, also calling the uke JAIL BAIT is fucking funny AF. This shit got no right being this funny, the fucking salt chapter too, be gone horny demon fucking hilarioussss!!!

Firts of, rest in peace author-nim. i liked the different take on hunters and dungeons, the not so pretty side, a lot of manhuas with this genre glorify the whole thing. So nice take, the dubbel awakening, them being part of the military, people adopting other children to get their own out of the service, really loved the more 'real' take on the genre, story wise, it was good, the way his life had only ever been for his brother, everything he did... seeing the 15 years later, i cant help but think both of them kinda went crazy, being locked in a dungeon for 10 years and dying, not knowing if your broyher is dead and getting experimented on for the sake of getting strong enough to find him...the rape tho, not doing foreplay once, couldve been better, but maybe it should be seen as something that reflects their state of mind... Crazy potential with this one!

This is continued on a different site...

Righttt, its okay, identity crisis type shit

Well, what did i just read... 5 chapters of confusion... First he dates the brother, is jealous of the sister, then marries the sister but keeps doing shit with the brother, divorces the sister after a year, goes back to the brother, ruins the relationship between brother and sister, brother doesn't seem to give a fuck tho.... what? Like, what just happened in this manhua? Like i feel if it had more chapters and was worked out better story wise, it would definitly be interesting!

Righttt, idk what to feel, not in a bad way just an underwhelming way i guess, very little storyline and the smut wasnt even that good... again i think its the lack of chapters and storyline that did this one in...