Hiyori-chan's manga / #Omegaverse(4)

Okey...it was good, but like the ending?? It doesnt feel like an ending, and we really just jumped from them being like 'hey me going to the bridge and killing myself was a misunderstanding, let me show you around the bridge' to six months later bro is pregnant...and they're husbands?! And then boom introduce some blond omega woman in the last chap to make uke jealous and insecure?? But then seme has 'sex' with him and all is well they make a good couple? Idk the end was not an end like it just did not feel like one. And now that im thinking about the story...i dont feel like the chemistry was there? Like even more so near the end... it surely wasnt the best ive read but it was okay could definitly use some more side stories cause now it just feels unfinished.... The topics touched upon was a nice change, it was more drama, heartbreak, etc. The suicide, losing a baby, living with the thought of is my partner going to try suicide again. A happy ending is definitly not a must, but if you want to go in that direction at least finish it... It just isnt to memorable of a story for me...

No words.... I really liked it, the sex, the enemy to lovers, the overprotective alpha. The story building was very nice i would’ve loved even more back story on seth but it is what it is. Would’ve also liked even more story about their life after having the kids and how they handle everything after the main plot. It was beautiful to see the love between gradualy unfold<3 Near the end it did feel rushed, like the chapters were reaching the limit and they just shoved the whold end of the story in a few chapters. Other than that chef kiss, beautifully done! Enjoyed reading this one<3

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA LOVED IT, LIKE FUCKING LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!! EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! The love, the sex, the communication, the hurt, the art!!!!! EVERYTHING fucking amazing AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH LOVE IT I'm sad it's over love you karlyle and ash you guys are amazing and make me believe in love again <3

5 FUCKING STARS! BEAUTIFUL JUST BEAUTIFUL!