I wish they did some of the time transitions better, at the end, when it skipped from Justin hugging Edward after his month-long stay in his hometown to them at dinner I'm assuming 2 years later, I got confused because Justin suddenly looked so different and Edward came in in a whole ass suit, before Edward came in I legitimately thought they were doing a "doing our hair like how it was in high school" kind of thing. Anyways, they should've put a ~2 years later~ transition panel, it would've helped in avoiding that kind of confusion. Otherwise, I LOVED this story and I do wish they added in some stories about Justin's sister and Edward's brother but what I got was pretty satisfying. I also wish they drew sex scenes but the 'shounen ai' tag kinda told me what to expect already so I wasn't that disappointed. Great story and would like to read more from these author's and see how their storytelling improves.
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