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This is si cute and wholesome aaaaaaaa I love the art, the story, and the 2 main characters ️ at first yhey kinda reminds me of Ash and Eiji from Banana Fish specially the past experience of Sugaru. ಥ‿ಥ Sumire is supplpperrr adorable, the other senpai is handsome too (๑♡⌓♡๑) just wish there's more extra chapter I wanna see them in uni

I just skim through out the story, the story telling really irks me but i love the art thou it looks inconsistent. The plot??? It's very tiring and not that enjoyable thou the premise is very interesting: ex crown prince x enemy general (they're former lovers), I want to read angtsy series with happy ending but doesn't rely too much on miscommunication plot, the seme acts like a child and so immature and the uke (in the first chapters, idk in the rest) is unbelievable selfless damnn he's too unrealistic. The author should put a lot more on smooth story telling and development of the characters cuz I don't really feel them, when the people of the ex crown prince betrayed him something like that I was supposed to be angry at them and feel really bad with the crown prince but that didn't happen i was unsatisfied with that. I'm not a writer and writing a story and manhua like this is hard but if u want readers to sympathize with your characters you should make them relatable (or even not that relatablybut make them feel like they are human or whatever traits that audience will sympathize or feel them) whatever role or characters they are. i haven't read the extra if I have tume I'll come back

One of my favourites