Vio's manga / #Didn't read this(9)

I just want to see the ending.

Kicking him off is a pleasant thing to see. There is a background on both characters. MC is okay, he just isn't my type of character. ML on the other hand.. it seems like he's the author's type (no judgement) because is it really necessary or even fitting for him to be suddenly caring for him. Considering, MC does pique him but they don't have that relationship yet for him to be aggressively questioning him or he really is just an aggressive dude.

I don't like endings that end up the same as the beginning.

"Are you afraid of being abandoned again?", "He protected us from our parents." Man, you barely know him. Like, I know you like him but why are you out there psychoanalyzing and saying it out loud, shush. "He's a monster" he kind of has the atmosphere of an asshole rather than a monster when it comes to beating people up, and I didn't like the execution. His is more of "I became so closed off to people, so I hide this 'beat annoying people up', and became so snappy but i'm just wounded by my abusive parents." It would be more of my thing, if he leaned towards the loner neurotic and conscientious guy or just less of "I'm just a wounded guy."

Well, I i thought this would be atmospheric and a bit more about their values because of the cover. It's a blueprint. Is it all about preference, because his character is all about him being innocent and erotic, my eyes have been burned.

Well first of all, if you're so possessive of him then why the fuck would you show him getting fucked, just say you want a threesome, dear author. Second, why the fuck do they always tell that the MC has always been undesirable then show all these men getting their dick out like the fucking ml? The connection is supposed to be one and only, if you truly wanna show that they are so fucking above. At that point, whoever gets to fuck the MC first is the ml, there is no love or like nor attractiveness to it, just sluts, whores, and shitty characters being led by their ass or dick, one inch away from being an ecchi or hentai. "Two men bound by fate." You mean shitty generic fetishes.

No wonder you got divorced three times.

Their dynamic could be good but #1 you can't compete with the dead. #2 don't tell me he didn't notice shit from a kid.

"Good woman"? you stupid little shit. How old are you? A good fucking person isn't ever a pedo. The author likes the actually a playboy, living for the sex, and borderline childlike innocence as a pair, kys.