Kenziecake's manga / #unrequited love(98)

I really liked it. I thought the narration was flowery, but had elements I really liked. Like both brothers trying to decide what it meant to separate the brother from the person. That being said, I think both brothers could have gained from talking more and assuming less.

I think similarity to the mc, but ehh. I would have like this story so much more if the childhood friends had ended up together, if you stop it at ch.4 then it sorta is possible.

Oh my godness, it was a little confusing and fast past in some parts, but I rather have that than something that just meanders. Anyway, it really picks up after his fall, which is really fun.