Krysroyce23's manga / #royalty(3)

It would be a 4 but the bad translation really turned me off and made it kinda confusing to follow some points/conversations. THAT said, wow that man devised a whole plot in which he knew his “wife” and “child” would fall into temptation, betray him, and he’d rightfully kill them. His sex was aggressive part of me was confused about how I felt of him wanting to see her cry only for him. It was like turned on but It also made me wonder how painful the sex was so then I was concerned. BUT THAT MAN WAS ABOUT IT! Cuz those scenes he was having the sex! He wasn’t just fucking her ya know. He spent so much time on fingering, kissing, eating her out- I’m sure it would have been painful at first since he was huge! with a horse’s stamina! full of desire for her! but even she couldn’t distinguish the lines of pain and pleasure which I feel like is honest about this sort of thing. It (penetration) hurts/is uncomfortable and it feels good at feels good Oh plus the bird metaphor for his desire!! Hot!!! This was pretty hot. Like you know it was a story for women to enjoy. FL was a little whiny but if you’re rags to riches I totally get it

mhmmmmmmm idk it was gooood but also not super satisfying. I wish she gave in a bit more or didnt sound so weak when doing so. AND THAT SHE WASNT SO NAIVE BECAUSE GIRL WHY WOULD SEJEANNE KNOW SHIT OR HAVE ACCESS TO THE SULTAN THAT ENIN COULDNT GIVE YOU CMON BE SMART. That's like a pet peeve of mine when writing FLs. However, this was really romantic and I love their backstory!!!! The sultan was a good mix of sexyyyy and gentle teheeeee

SO GOOD! THE HISTORICAL DETAILS! THE FORCEFFUL NESS OF THE CROWN PRINCE WITHOUT RAPE! THE KINDNESS OF THE COURTLADY WITHOUT HER BEING A DUNCE! THE CUTENESS OF THE GRAND PRINCE! MANY GREAT THINGS!