KookieMonstr13's manga / #psychological(88)

4 stars for future me bc of art, story is borderline unbearable omg

The story was short, which worked for this story, but it could've been longer with more details and/or a little more plot. The plot twist was good, didn't expect it to be that. The parents suck though.

I was going to give this 4 stars because the characters annoyed me and the plot developer wasn't what I wanted, but that doesn't necessarily mean it's a terrible story, but more so not my taste. The writing was good, considering the annoying characters were truly unbearable, however I wish things developed further or were explained further. I really thought that Edith wanted Ray and then Kile because he wanted powers, but it want. Although it wasn't explicitly explained, or so I think because I skimmed, he wanted Ray because he was obsessed with him, but I wasn't completely sure why he wanted Kile if he didn't really care about powers as much as he thought or was expected from the reader. Maybe he did want the esp, or maybe he thought Kile could help bring Ray back, maybe Edith didn't even complete know what he wanted until the end either. I wish Lucian being in love with Ray was cleared up to something else, like anything but romantic feelings. However, he was in love with Ray and then Kile. Sure, he fell in love with Kile because he looked like Ray, but what upsets me more is that Lucian never admits that. The moment he told Kile he loved him, and not because he was substituting him for his twin brother, was too brief in my opinion. I personally feel like they brought alot of characters and plot points and Tried to develop them too much for only 80 chapter. This made everything seem half developed or worked on.